Audience feedback from focus group -double page article

I asked my focus group to assess and evaluate my double page article, I used open ended questions to ensure I got enough feedback and reflection in order to improve my article. I asked questions like 'How does the layout represent the generic conventions of a magazine?' and 'Does the colour scheme reflect the artist that is being portrayed and how?', also asked 'If the style of font reflects the article presented?'.

The summary of my findings concluded that I need to change the layout of my article into columns in order to reflect the generic conventions of a music magazine. However, my focus group also said that the colours and fonts and style of language used represents the artist featured.